Thursday, August 6, 2020

The Narrator Part 1

I wrote a scary story about a girl called Lucy. I was inspired to make it after listening to Something Scary on the way to West A Maths. There are going to be other parts to this.

The Narrator part 1

The Shandelear family moved into a new house. It was a mansion, with clean white walls and golden patterned wallpaper. They loved the place.

The real masterpiece of the house, you see, was the beautiful crystal chandelier. You’d think they wouldn’t want to have a chandelier after the… incident. 

In the Shandelear’s old home, there was also a large chandelier. One night, Emiline and Ashley, the mother and father, woke up to a loud squeaking noise. It seemed to be coming from the chandelier! They groggily walked outside their room to find the priceless hanging light was swinging violently. It suddenly fell, crashing onto the ground floor, leaving gaping holes in the ceiling and floor.

When they were repairing it, the first thing they had to do was get the chandelier out of the way. When one builder was moving it he caught sight of something. It was a shadowy figure with long, gnarled fingers and bright red eyes.

The builder screamed and told everyone what he had seen, but there was no point in telling any of the other builders. They had seen it too.

With no way to repair their house, it went into ruins and the family left.


Emiline and Ashley had one daughter, Lucy. On their first night at the new house, Lucy had a strange dream. She dreamed that she was swinging on their chandelier, and at the end she always saw the shadowy figure with it’s arms outstretched.

She thought she was dreaming about it because she was afraid of the figure, but the dreams continued.

After two weeks in the new house Lucy’s parents noticed that the chandelier was swinging every morning. Lucy overheard them talking about it, and decided it couldn’t have been her, because every morning she woke up back in her bed.

The swinging of the chandelier continued for then next week, so the parents decided to take action.


They set up a security camera facing the chandelier. 

When they woke up the next morning, they looked at the camera. As usual, the chandelier was swinging. After a few minutes of searching they finally found something. But it wasn’t what they expected . . .

Swinging from the chandelier was . . .    Lucy.

She suddenly dropped from the chandelier. She moved her head up and smiled at the camera. But it wasn’t a normal, sweet smile. It was an evil smile with shadows crossing her face. She didn’t look anything like herself.


Emiline and Ashley took Lucy to a paranormal investigator. She was tested on and watched. She also slept away from home to see if it stopped, which it didn’t. She was put into another house with a chandelier to see if it still happened.


Meanwhile, Lucy was having different dreams. Dreams of the figure with it’s arms outstretched, trying to claw her.

The figure finally managed to catch her. It gouged out her eyes and clawed her heart.

She was now fully possessed. 

She killed her family. She took the lives of the paranormal investigators. 

And then she disappeared.

She hasn’t been seen since.


So if you live in a house with a chandelier and it starts swinging… she’s coming for you.

Tick, tock, goes the clock, she will make you die

Tick, tock, goes the clock, beneath the ground you’ll lie


Tick, tock, goes the clock, open up the window

Tick, tock, goes the clock, she’s creeping down low


Tick, tock, goes the clock, swinging on the chandelier

Tick, tock, goes the clock, you wouldn’t know she’s there


Tick, tock, goes the clock, your face will turn blue

Tick, tock, goes the clock, ‘cause Lucy’s coming for you.


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